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*~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* |
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
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 Subject: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Wed Mar 04, 2009 4:47 am |
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Last edited by shanu on Mon Apr 06, 2009 12:28 am; edited 4 times in total
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Vino
Vino De Jerez
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Sat Apr 04, 2009 12:09 pm |
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thank u sho much  ...Allah tum dono judges ki muraad poori kare is khushi main  ... @ Mahnoor : main competition main participate kerne k liye post kerta hun...hamara b dil kerta hai g  ... My Ghazal fo next week :Bikhar Rahi Hai Meri Zaat Usay Kehna
Kabhi Milay To Yeh Baat Usay Kehna
Woh Saath Tha To Zamana Tha Humsafar Mera
Magar Ab Koi Nahi Mere Saath Usay Kehna
Usay Kehna Ke Bin Us Ke din Nahi Kutt Ta
Sisk Sisk Ke Katt Ti Hai Raat Usay Kehna
Usay Pukaron Ke Khudhi Pohanch jaon Us Ke Paas
Nahi Rahay Woh Halaat Usay kehna
Agar Woh Phir Na Lautay To Ae-Meharban Qasid
Hamari Zeest Ke Halaat Usay Kehna
Har Jeet Us Ke Naam kar Raha Hun Mein
Mein Manta Hun Apni Haar Usay kehna ............... 
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Mast Hafsay
Boyz vs Girlz Mod
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Sat Apr 04, 2009 12:31 pm |
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Mast Hafsay
Boyz vs Girlz Mod
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Sun Apr 05, 2009 8:49 am |
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Toote howe khawabon mein haqiqat dhundta hoon,*
*Pathar ke dilon mein mohabbat dhundta hoon.*
*Naadan hoon mein ab tak yeh bhi nahin samjha,*
*Bejaan buton mein ibaadat dhundta hoon.**Mere jazbaaton ki keemat yahan kuch bhi nahin,*
*Beimaani ke baazaron mein sharafat dhundta hoon.*
*Is ajnabi dunia mein koi bhi apna nahin,*
*Gairon ki aankhon mein apni surat dhundta hoon.**Umeed ki thi pyar ki bas yehi bhool thi meri,*
*Girte hue ashkon mein apni hasrat dhundta hoon
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$am
Chilli Milli
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Sun Apr 05, 2009 9:57 am |
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Abhi wo dard baqi hai Abhi wo dard baqi hai Agarcha waqt marham hai Magar kuch waqt lagta hai Kisi ko bhool janay main Dobara dil laganay main Abhi kuch waqt lagna hai Abhi wo dard Baqi hai Main kaisay nai Ulfat main Apni Zaat gum kar don Keh mayray jism-o-wajdaa.n main Abhi wo fard baqi hai Abhi uss shakhs ki mujh pay Nigah-e-sard baqi hai Abhi tu ishq kay rastoo.n ki Mujh pay gard baqi hai Abhi wo dard baqi hai ...
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AngelBee
User Ranks Moderator
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Mon Apr 06, 2009 3:05 am |
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*** Tum Kaisi MOHABBAT Kartay Ho ***
Tum Jahan Bhi Baith Kay Jatay Ho
Jis Cheez Ko Hath Lagatay Ho
Main Waheen Pe Baithi Rehti Hon
Uss Cheez Ko Chooti Rehti Hon
Main Aisi MOHABBAT Karti Hon
Tum Kaisi MOHABBAT Kartay Ho ...
Bay Khwaab Sajay Gul Danoon Main
Aankhoon sey Konpal Chunti Hon
Koi Lams Agar Choo Jayae Tou
Main Pehroon Usko Ginti Hon
Main Aisi MOHABBAT Karti Hon
Tum Kaisi MOHABBAT Kartay Ho ...
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Lycan
3000 Posts n u r a V.I.P member
Number of posts : 2921
Age : 37
Location : lahore, pakistan
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Mon Apr 06, 2009 6:22 am |
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[b]garmi e hasrat e nakam say jal jatay hian
hamcharagon ki tarhan sham say jal jatay hian
shama jiss aag main jalti hay numaish k lye
ham usi aag main gumnaam say jal jatay hian
khud numai tu nahi shywa e arbab e wafa
jin ko jalna ho woo aaram say jal jatay hain
bach nikaltay hian agar aatish e sayal say ham
sholay e aatish e gulfaam say jal jatay hian
jab bhi aata hay tara naam maray naam k sath
janay kion log maray naam say jal jatay hian
Last edited by umer malik on Mon Apr 06, 2009 6:24 am; edited 1 time in total
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Mon Apr 06, 2009 6:23 am |
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Mon Apr 06, 2009 7:40 am |
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Tazeer-e-ehtimaam-e-chaman kaun day gaya
Mujh ko gulaab jaisa kafan kaun day gaya
Daikhay jo khad-o-khaal toh socha hai baareha
Sehra ki chaandini ko badan kaun day gaya
Meri jabeen ki saari lakeerain teri atta
Lekin teri qaba ko shikan kaun day gaya
Teray hunar mai khulqat-e-khushboo sahi magar
Kaanton ko umer bhar ki chubhan kaun day gaya
Jungle say poochti hain hawaaon ki barhami
Jugnoo ki tairgi mai kiran kaun day gaya
Kis nay basaaye aankh mai ashkon kay qaaflay
Be-ghar musaafiron ko watan kaun day gaya
Tujh say toh khair pall ki musaafit ka saath tha
Meray badan ko itni thakan kaun day gaya
Todha hai kis nay nok-e-sinaan par sakoot-e-sabr
Lab bastagi ko taab-e-sukhan kaun day gaya
*Mohsin* wo kaayinaat-e-ghazal hai ussay bhi daikh
Mujh say na pooch mujh ko yeh funn kaun day gaya
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Lycan
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Mon Apr 06, 2009 8:14 am |
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oye yah banda tu modirator nahi tha! pichlay janam main!
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Mast Hafsay
Boyz vs Girlz Mod
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Age : 35
Location : multan
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Mon Apr 06, 2009 9:33 am |
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Tue Apr 07, 2009 3:16 am |
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umer wrote - Quote :
- oye yah banda tu modirator nahi tha!
pichlay janam main! kaya matlab bhai?????
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Lycan
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Tue Apr 07, 2009 5:21 am |
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matlab aap kopost karnay ka koi adhikar nahi hay! aap faisla karnay walon main say hi ho! aab agar koi yahi gazal copy kar k paste kar day tu woo tu aaram say jeet jaye ga na!
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Wed Apr 08, 2009 12:29 am |
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shbahs hay yeh ghazal woh kaisay post ker sakta hay and this is just for sharing not in the competition yeh baat main pehlay bhe dass chuka hoon
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Lycan
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Fri Apr 10, 2009 10:59 am |
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Mast Hafsay
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Fri Apr 10, 2009 11:03 am |
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Fri Apr 10, 2009 11:43 am |
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Mast Hafsay
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Fri Apr 10, 2009 11:46 am |
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sherry  chal aa ja jani tu jeet gya
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Usama1
You Rock... !
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Fri Apr 10, 2009 11:55 am |
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sherry jeet gaya.congratz sherry chalo is martaba main bhi hisa lo ga is comption main
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Fri Apr 10, 2009 12:05 pm |
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yeah sure 
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AngelBee
User Ranks Moderator
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Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Fri Apr 10, 2009 12:54 pm |
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Vino
Vino De Jerez
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Mast Hafsay
Boyz vs Girlz Mod
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Age : 35
Location : multan
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Sat Apr 11, 2009 3:40 am |
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Vino
Vino De Jerez
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Sat Apr 11, 2009 3:42 am |
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Tujhey Ishq Ho Khuda Karay Koe Tujh Ko Uss Sey Juda Karay Tere Hont Hansna Bhool Jaian Teri Ankh Purnamm Raha Karay To Uss Ki Batain Kya Karay To Uss Ki Batain Sunna Karay Ussay Dekh Kar To Ruk Paray Woh Nazar Jhuka Kar Chala Karay Tujhey Hijjar Ki Woh Jharri Lagay To Millan Ki Her Pall Dua Karay Tere Khuwab Bikhrain Tott Kar To Kirche Kirche Chunna Karay To Nagar Nagar Phira Karay To Galli Galli Sada Karay Tujhey Ishq Ho Phir Yakeen Hoo Ussay TasbiOon Per Parha Karay Main Kahoon "Ishq Dhong" Hai To Nahin Nahin Kaha Karay.....!
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ALI MALiK
Suggest Us Some New Sections or Tasks
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Sat Apr 11, 2009 3:47 am |
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poetry k ilawa ghazalz... bhi hai kia hi baat hai
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Sat Apr 11, 2009 5:00 am |
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yeh poetry aur ghazals main thora diff ALI sb batain gay aap ??? and speedy yeh post bhe............... 
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Sat Apr 11, 2009 5:08 am |
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iss topic kaa name soch raha hon best ghazal kee bijayay sherry kee shaitanian  rakh diya jayay
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dolii
Nazre Karam Main 150 wordz ka Love Letter Likho
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Sat Apr 11, 2009 6:54 am |
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ab kia likhen hum kagez per ab likhne ko kia baki hai, eik dil tha wo tot gaya ab totne ko kia baki hai eik sheks ko hum ne chaha tha eik rait pe nekhs banaya tha, wo rait to kb ki bekher gae wo neksh kaha ab baki hai hum jin ko apni qezlon ka unwan banaya kerte the lefzo ka bana ke taj_mahel kagz pe sajaya kerte the wo hum ko aikla chor gae seb rishton se mun mor gaya ab rishte sarae soone hai wo payar kaha ab baki hai ab kia likhne hum kagez per........ab likhne ko kia.......................
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Mast Hafsay
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Sat Apr 11, 2009 7:29 am |
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~*~Ankhoon Main Raha Dil Main Utar Kar Nahin Dekha...~*~
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~*~Bay Waqt Agar Jaoonga Sab Chonk Pare Ge...~*~
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~*~Jis Din Se Chala Hoon Meri Manzil Par Nazar Hai...~*~
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~*~Khat Asa Likha Hai K Nagine Se Jare Hain...~*~
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~*~Main Moum Hoon Usne Mujhe Choh Kar Nahin Dekha...~*~
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~*~Jis Ne Meri Ankhoon Main Samandar Nahin Dekha...~*
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Lycan
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Sat Apr 11, 2009 7:33 am |
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welcome dolli ji here! 
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Lycan
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| Subject: Re: *~****BEST GHAZAL OF THE WEEK****~* Sat Apr 11, 2009 7:36 am |
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iss week me ghazal post karon ga tu jeeton ga bhi!
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