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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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 Subject: Rate the Previouse Shair Tue Mar 03, 2009 7:13 am |
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First topic message reminder :Rate the Previouse Shair
The rules are simple. You only have to read the shair from previous post and rate that shair from 1 to 10 out of 10. And also write your shair. I think it will be interesting !
So I start
usi jaga pay khara hun jahan wo bichra tha ,,,,,,
suna hai jab say k mosam palat k atay hain,,,,,,
No give points to my shair 
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Mast Hafsay
Boyz vs Girlz Mod
Number of posts : 12116
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Mar 09, 2009 3:14 pm |
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7/10Us ki tawajah tere naseeb mein likhi he nahi........
chor dey apnay aap ko badnaseeb kehna............
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Komal
Poetry Section Mod
Number of posts : 2263
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Mar 09, 2009 3:15 pm |
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Aati hai yaad Aksar, Rotey hain be-basi mein
Aik Be-Wafa ko Hum ne, Chaaha tha Zindagi mein.
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Mast Hafsay
Boyz vs Girlz Mod
Number of posts : 12116
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Mar 09, 2009 3:20 pm |
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9 Hoti hai bari zalim Yaktarfa Mohbat........
Woh yaad tu atay hain par Yaad nahi kartay......
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Awz
Halla Gulla Mod
Number of posts : 2018
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Mar 09, 2009 3:25 pm |
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6/10 Zindagi main har dam hasntay rahohansna zindagi ki zarurat hai zindagi ko es andaaz main jio kaap ko dekh kr log kahein, wo dekho zindagi kitni khubsurat hai
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Komal
Poetry Section Mod
Number of posts : 2263
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Mar 09, 2009 3:26 pm |
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Tum mujhe bhool bhi jao to ye huk he tumko,
meri bat aur hai maine to mohabbat ki hai.
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Awz
Halla Gulla Mod
Number of posts : 2018
Age : 34
Location : Karachi
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Mar 09, 2009 3:32 pm |
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6/10 Laakh chaha magar voh muje bhula na sakamera khayal vo dil se mita na sakaMujse duur buhat duur hogaya tha magarapni aankhon se mere chehre ko hata na saka Mujse duuri badhana chahta tha perkabhi voh mujhse duur ja na sakaKitne shukwe hain us k dil main mere lyechah kr bhi kabhi voh muje bata na saka anjaan rakhna chahta tha muje apni chahat seHaal-e-dil mujse chupa na saka
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Mast Hafsay
Boyz vs Girlz Mod
Number of posts : 12116
Age : 35
Location : multan
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Komal
Poetry Section Mod
Number of posts : 2263
Age : 33
Location : Toronto, Canada
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Mar 09, 2009 9:23 pm |
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be-naam zindagi ki haqiqat na pochiye faraz
kuch pur khalos log thy barbaad kar gay...!!
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$am
Chilli Milli
Number of posts : 7107
Age : 36
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Mar 09, 2009 9:26 pm |
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10/10 Aya he tha khyal ke ankhen jhalak gayi Ansoo kisi ki yaad ke kitne kareeb the..
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Komal
Poetry Section Mod
Number of posts : 2263
Age : 33
Location : Toronto, Canada
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Mar 09, 2009 9:30 pm |
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Rooth jatay ho to kuch Aur Haseen Lagtay Ho,,,,,
Hum nay Ye Soch k he Tum ko Khafa Rakha Hay,,,,
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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Mast Hafsay
Boyz vs Girlz Mod
Number of posts : 12116
Age : 35
Location : multan
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Tue Mar 10, 2009 8:04 am |
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10 Meri aanko mai aanso aa gaye tum darguzar kar du
Qasam lay lo kih mai waqif nahi ta addab-e-mihfal say
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Tue Mar 10, 2009 1:00 pm |
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9 Main pa na saka aaj tak is khalish sy chutkara Mohsin
Wo mujhy jeet bhi sakta tha, na janey kyun hara..?
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$am
Chilli Milli
Number of posts : 7107
Age : 36
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Tue Mar 10, 2009 9:45 pm |
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9.9 Chandi raat main or bhi shiddat say ay ge us ki yad ~Behtar hai FARAZ soo jana sham se pehly
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Wed Mar 11, 2009 12:02 pm |
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aaye kuchh abr kuchh sharaab aaye
us ke baad aaye jo azaab aaye
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Lycan
3000 Posts n u r a V.I.P member
Number of posts : 2921
Age : 37
Location : lahore, pakistan
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Thu Mar 12, 2009 12:03 am |
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8 APNI ANKHOON K SAMUNDAR MAIN UTTAR JANAY DO TARA MUJRIM HOON MUJHAY DOOB K MAR JANAY DOO!
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Thu Mar 12, 2009 1:18 am |
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kal raat chand ho bahoo tujh jaisa tha,,,,,,
wohi ,husn, wohi gharoor, or wohi doori,,,,,,,,
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Lycan
3000 Posts n u r a V.I.P member
Number of posts : 2921
Age : 37
Location : lahore, pakistan
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Thu Mar 12, 2009 1:20 am |
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7 kuch woo kinchay kinhchay rahay kuch ham kinhchy kinhchy rahay isi kashmakash main toot gaya rishta chah ka
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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Knight Rider
Parha Likha Mod
Number of posts : 1656
Age : 31
Location : EVeRyWhErE
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Thu Mar 12, 2009 2:10 am |
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8.5 Ek Lamha Jo bar Bar Ata Hai,Najane Yeh Dil Kia chahta Hai....................... Kaash Aap Hote Hamare Saamne Par Yeh Kash,Kash Hi Reh Jata hai...........
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Thu Mar 12, 2009 2:45 am |
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wo jo ik bat bahut talkh kahi thi us ne
bat to yad nahin , yad hay lehja us ka
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Knight Rider
Parha Likha Mod
Number of posts : 1656
Age : 31
Location : EVeRyWhErE
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Thu Mar 12, 2009 2:55 am |
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9 Kaun kehta hay k teri yaad say ghafil hay Saqib Bister ki har shikan se poch kaisay guzarti hay raat meri..!
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Lycan
3000 Posts n u r a V.I.P member
Number of posts : 2921
Age : 37
Location : lahore, pakistan
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Thu Mar 12, 2009 9:12 am |
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6 hamen ye zid hai k paaen tou bai talab paaen unhen ye zid hai k dast e sawal daraaz tou ho
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Mast Hafsay
Boyz vs Girlz Mod
Number of posts : 12116
Age : 35
Location : multan
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Thu Mar 12, 2009 11:05 am |
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7 Aiay adam kisi bhi roop ki tooheen na kar................
KHUDA phirta hai dunaya mein kai bhes badal kar............
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Thu Mar 12, 2009 1:32 pm |
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zbrdast 9.5 Ese Khayal Main Guzri Hay Sham -e- Dard Akser
Kah Dard Hadd Say Bharhay Ga Tu Muskura Donga!!
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Mast Hafsay
Boyz vs Girlz Mod
Number of posts : 12116
Age : 35
Location : multan
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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Mast Hafsay
Boyz vs Girlz Mod
Number of posts : 12116
Age : 35
Location : multan
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Fri Mar 13, 2009 11:48 am |
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6 usay ye shikwa k mein usay samjh na saka aur mujhay ye maan k mein janta faqat usi ko tha 
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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cool and nice
Agar forum bana-nay ka moqa mila tau uska naam kia rakho gay
Number of posts : 1342
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Location : LHR
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sat Mar 14, 2009 8:42 am |
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