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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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 Subject: Rate the Previouse Shair Tue Mar 03, 2009 7:13 am |
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First topic message reminder :Rate the Previouse Shair
The rules are simple. You only have to read the shair from previous post and rate that shair from 1 to 10 out of 10. And also write your shair. I think it will be interesting !
So I start
usi jaga pay khara hun jahan wo bichra tha ,,,,,,
suna hai jab say k mosam palat k atay hain,,,,,,
No give points to my shair 
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sheroz
You Rock... !
Number of posts : 3405
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Apr 27, 2009 4:13 am |
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6 bay naizi had se guzri banda parwar kab talak hum kahein gay hal-dil or ap ferma dein gay "kya"
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
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sheroz
You Rock... !
Number of posts : 3405
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Apr 27, 2009 2:50 pm |
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8 hum cheen len gay tum se ye ada-e-bay naizi tum mangtay phiro gay apna ghroor hum say
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Tue Apr 28, 2009 10:45 am |
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Baray Nazuk Hotay Hain Ye Pyaar Kay Rishtay
Hanstay Hanstay Bhi Kabhi DIL Toot Jatay Hain
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Hamza
You are very close to your dream
Number of posts : 2891
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Thu Apr 30, 2009 2:38 am |
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8 Dil tab se udass hai jab se khabar hoi hai FARAZ
Miltay hain wo khaloos se her ajnabi k sath..
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Fri May 01, 2009 7:23 am |
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7.5 Judaai Uss Ki Ekk Hunar Sikha Gayi Hai Mujh Ko
Ke Abb To Main Deewaroon Say Bhi Baatein Kiya Karta Hoon
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sheroz
You Rock... !
Number of posts : 3405
Age : 34
Location : United States of Matti tal
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Wed May 20, 2009 2:00 pm |
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7.5
itna na yaad aao k ma khud ko tum samajh bethon
mujhay ehsas rehnay do k meri apni b hasti hay!!!
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zulfi_rocks
Herez Your Gift...All Your Ranks Are Full Now...
Number of posts : 2177
Age : 34
Location : Faisalabad
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Thu May 21, 2009 11:23 am |
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Meri awargi mein dakhal tera bhi hai Mohsin teri yaad aaye to ghar acha nahi lagta. Mohsin Naqvi
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zulfi_rocks
Herez Your Gift...All Your Ranks Are Full Now...
Number of posts : 2177
Age : 34
Location : Faisalabad
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Thu May 21, 2009 11:24 am |
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7.5 Meri awargi mein dakhal tera bhi hai Mohsin teri yaad aaye to ghar acha nahi lagta. Mohsin Naqvi
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sheroz
You Rock... !
Number of posts : 3405
Age : 34
Location : United States of Matti tal
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sat May 23, 2009 5:05 am |
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8 ye meri zid hay k tujhay tujh se pana hay faraz warna ager khuda se mangon tu abi mil jaye mujhay
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$arah khan
Darin Princess
Number of posts : 3980
Age : 35
Location : karachi
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sat May 23, 2009 2:42 pm |
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08 kal tak jou kahte they ronakey mahfil tujhe se hai "Faraz"
Aaj wo hee mujh se ulajhte hein k tu mahfil mein na aya ker 
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Komal
Poetry Section Mod
Number of posts : 2263
Age : 33
Location : Toronto, Canada
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Thu May 28, 2009 12:01 pm |
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8 Mat de hamain khush rehnaY Ki Dua 'm0hsiN' hm khushian Rakhtay nahi,Baant dia krty haiN
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Komal
Poetry Section Mod
Number of posts : 2263
Age : 33
Location : Toronto, Canada
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Thu May 28, 2009 12:13 pm |
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Apni tanhai mere naam pe abad kare
kon ho ga jo mujhe us ki tarha yad kare
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zulfi_rocks
Herez Your Gift...All Your Ranks Are Full Now...
Number of posts : 2177
Age : 34
Location : Faisalabad
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sat May 30, 2009 1:39 pm |
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5 Just Check The Meaningful Line Of Sir.Iqbal, Jahaan Beeni Meri Fitrat Hai Lekin,
Kisi JAMSHAID Ka Saaghar Nahi Main.
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$arah khan
Darin Princess
Number of posts : 3980
Age : 35
Location : karachi
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Tue Jun 02, 2009 2:11 am |
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08 wafa ki jung mat larna bekaar jati hai.. zamana jeet jata hai muhobbat har jati hai.. humara tazkira choro hum ese log hein jin ko zmana kuch nhin kahta judayee maar jati hai...
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zulfi_rocks
Herez Your Gift...All Your Ranks Are Full Now...
Number of posts : 2177
Age : 34
Location : Faisalabad
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Wed Jun 03, 2009 12:09 am |
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Janahan-e-Zinadagani Mein, Kainaat-e-Faani mein,
Ishq Hai Asal Hayaat, Maut Hai is PAr Haraam.......Sir. Iqbal
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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zulfi_rocks
Herez Your Gift...All Your Ranks Are Full Now...
Number of posts : 2177
Age : 34
Location : Faisalabad
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Wed Jun 03, 2009 12:45 am |
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8.2 Its My Pleasure to back in..........! Raha ik ik qadam pe paas-e-Aadaab-e-Talab warna,
Wahan hum thay jahan pana tera Mushkil nahi hota.Tabish Dehelvi
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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zulfi_rocks
Herez Your Gift...All Your Ranks Are Full Now...
Number of posts : 2177
Age : 34
Location : Faisalabad
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Wed Jun 03, 2009 1:18 am |
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Be-Faida hai Zeest mein Ahbaab ka Hujoom,
HO Pekar-e-Khuloos to kafi hai aik Shakhs
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Wed Jun 03, 2009 1:43 am |
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9 Woh Khatam Qaid ki Miyad B Nahi Karta
Aur Main Zehmat-e-Faryad B Nahi Karta
Kabhi Kabhi Woh Mujay Itna Yaad Aata Hai "FARAZ"
K Main Zid Mein Aa Ker Usay Yaad B Nahi Karta......
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zulfi_rocks
Herez Your Gift...All Your Ranks Are Full Now...
Number of posts : 2177
Age : 34
Location : Faisalabad
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Wed Jun 03, 2009 2:00 am |
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7.5 Hamdam jo Dekhta hoon to Pehlu mein Dil nahi,
Baitha tha us k pass, mera Dil wahin Raha.Shaikh Ghulam Hamdani Mashafi
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Wed Jun 03, 2009 2:21 am |
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Kuch haadisaat-e-zeest hain kuch waardaat-e-gam
Bus itna sa falsafa hay meray shair-o-ghazal ka......!
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zulfi_rocks
Herez Your Gift...All Your Ranks Are Full Now...
Number of posts : 2177
Age : 34
Location : Faisalabad
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Wed Jun 03, 2009 5:56 am |
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7.3 Rakhoon main rok kar kyun apne dil ko mashafi, mere kahe mein ab mera dil nahi raha
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Knight Rider
Parha Likha Mod
Number of posts : 1656
Age : 31
Location : EVeRyWhErE
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sat Jun 06, 2009 7:51 am |
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Apne siwa bataao! kuch mila hai tumhein Faraz ? Hazaar baar lein hain tum ne mere dil ki talashiyaan
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Fri Jun 26, 2009 11:10 pm |
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bro rating kithay gay ???? 7 Mohabbaton ka yaqeen hai na nafraton ka gumaan
Woh mill raha hai magar kaisay rakh rakhao k saath
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Ch@rming
i think u still wish to be a V.I.P member
Number of posts : 2471
Age : 36
Location : Karachi
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sat Jun 27, 2009 2:20 am |
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8 Roti hui ankhon se tujhe Muskan kese dun
Anjan hun Khud tujhe Pahchan kese dun
Tu hi tu hai jaan meri
Tu hi bata tujhe apni jaan kese dun.
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Umair Abdullah
Take Rest...Ya Really working Hard
Number of posts : 1826
Age : 33
Location : Multan, Pakistan
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sun Jun 28, 2009 9:21 am |
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8 Unko namoos bhi izzat bhi pazirai bhi
Mujh ko ronay ko mayessar nahi tanhai bhi
Apnay he haal pe hansna, kabhi hans k rona
Mein bayak waqt tamasha bhi tamashai bhi
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zulfi_rocks
Herez Your Gift...All Your Ranks Are Full Now...
Number of posts : 2177
Age : 34
Location : Faisalabad
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Jul 20, 2009 1:12 pm |
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6 Pass Darya hai, Kinare hi kinarey jao,
Yeh Ishq nahi Aasaan , Pyare jao,
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Umair Abdullah
Take Rest...Ya Really working Hard
Number of posts : 1826
Age : 33
Location : Multan, Pakistan
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Jul 20, 2009 1:28 pm |
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Teray husn ko parday ki haajat hi kya hay Faraz
Kon hosh mein rehta hay tujhay dekhnay k baad
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