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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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 Subject: Rate the Previouse Shair Tue Mar 03, 2009 7:13 am |
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First topic message reminder :Rate the Previouse Shair
The rules are simple. You only have to read the shair from previous post and rate that shair from 1 to 10 out of 10. And also write your shair. I think it will be interesting !
So I start
usi jaga pay khara hun jahan wo bichra tha ,,,,,,
suna hai jab say k mosam palat k atay hain,,,,,,
No give points to my shair 
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Fri Jun 26, 2009 11:10 pm |
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bro rating kithay gay ???? 7 Mohabbaton ka yaqeen hai na nafraton ka gumaan
Woh mill raha hai magar kaisay rakh rakhao k saath
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Ch@rming
i think u still wish to be a V.I.P member
Number of posts : 2471
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sat Jun 27, 2009 2:20 am |
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8 Roti hui ankhon se tujhe Muskan kese dun
Anjan hun Khud tujhe Pahchan kese dun
Tu hi tu hai jaan meri
Tu hi bata tujhe apni jaan kese dun.
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Umair Abdullah
Take Rest...Ya Really working Hard
Number of posts : 1826
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sun Jun 28, 2009 9:21 am |
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8 Unko namoos bhi izzat bhi pazirai bhi
Mujh ko ronay ko mayessar nahi tanhai bhi
Apnay he haal pe hansna, kabhi hans k rona
Mein bayak waqt tamasha bhi tamashai bhi
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zulfi_rocks
Herez Your Gift...All Your Ranks Are Full Now...
Number of posts : 2177
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Jul 20, 2009 1:12 pm |
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6 Pass Darya hai, Kinare hi kinarey jao,
Yeh Ishq nahi Aasaan , Pyare jao,
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Umair Abdullah
Take Rest...Ya Really working Hard
Number of posts : 1826
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Jul 20, 2009 1:28 pm |
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Teray husn ko parday ki haajat hi kya hay Faraz
Kon hosh mein rehta hay tujhay dekhnay k baad
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zulfi_rocks
Herez Your Gift...All Your Ranks Are Full Now...
Number of posts : 2177
Age : 34
Location : Faisalabad
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Jul 20, 2009 1:35 pm |
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6.5, i think aap ne shair pe zyada ghor nahi kiya? okz, Sirf dhundlaye hue taaroun ki chamak dekhi hai,
kab hua, koun hua, mujhse khafa yad nahi,
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Umair Abdullah
Take Rest...Ya Really working Hard
Number of posts : 1826
Age : 33
Location : Multan, Pakistan
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Jul 20, 2009 1:48 pm |
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Mujh se nazrain wo aksar chura leta hay Faraz
Main ne kaghaz pe bhi bana k dekhi hian aankhain
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zulfi_rocks
Herez Your Gift...All Your Ranks Are Full Now...
Number of posts : 2177
Age : 34
Location : Faisalabad
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Jul 20, 2009 1:54 pm |
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ab k tera zikr, shayed hi ghazal mein aaye or se or hue dard k unwaan, jana, 6 for u
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$arah khan
Darin Princess
Number of posts : 3980
Age : 35
Location : karachi
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K@mi
Tuk-Kay Moderator
Number of posts : 1437
Age : 27
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Fri Sep 04, 2009 2:29 pm |
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5 Bandagi hamne chor di ahi fraaz
Kiya karen log jab Khuda ho jayen 
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mast Ahsen mast
Sing a Song for any forum member
Number of posts : 483
Age : 36
Location : Islamabad
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Fri Sep 04, 2009 3:25 pm |
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dekh lo khaab magar khaab ka charchaa na karo.....!!!
log jal jain gay suraj ki tamanna na karo....!!!
waqt ka kiya hai kisi pall main badal sukta hai.....!!!
ho sakey tum sey to tum mujh pey bharosa na karo...!!!
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$arah khan
Darin Princess
Number of posts : 3980
Age : 35
Location : karachi
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sat Sep 05, 2009 8:46 pm |
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08 Ye Raaz kon jaaney kis ka kasor tha..
Toota wohi sahara humein jis per guroor tha..
Bichar k wo humse najane kahan gya..
hum aj bhi tanha hein ..humara kya kasoor tha ...
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mast Ahsen mast
Sing a Song for any forum member
Number of posts : 483
Age : 36
Location : Islamabad
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sat Sep 05, 2009 9:29 pm |
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Maange tuu agar jaan bhi hans kar tujhe de dein.....!!!
Teri to koi baat bhi taali nahin jaati......!!!
Ham jaan se jaayen ge tabhi baat bane gi.....!!!!
Tum se to koi raah nikaali nahin jaati......!!!!
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$arah khan
Darin Princess
Number of posts : 3980
Age : 35
Location : karachi
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Tue Sep 08, 2009 12:32 pm |
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06 hey! Mast rate kidher hai ..mere previous shair kaa?? wo mujh se door reh ker khush hai..tou usey khush rehne dou.. mujh se mill ker usska udaas hona ..acha nhin lagta 
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K@mi
Tuk-Kay Moderator
Number of posts : 1437
Age : 27
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Tue Sep 08, 2009 12:42 pm |
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05 mujhe us shakhs k aflaas pe reham ata hai
jisse her chees mili magar muhabbat na mili,
Maar daley ga usse jurm ka ahsaas Nadeem
Qatal ker k b jisse Maqtool per sabqat na mili..........
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$arah khan
Darin Princess
Number of posts : 3980
Age : 35
Location : karachi
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Wed Sep 09, 2009 12:50 pm |
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06 "aflaas" ?  ek teri yaad bhoolti nhin
Jabar dil pey hazaar kerte hein ...
unk waadey takulufan hee sahi Mohsin
phir bhi hum aitbar kertey hein ....
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sun Sep 20, 2009 3:50 am |
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masomiat kaa yeh andaaz bhe meray sanam kaa hai mohsin
uss ko tasveer main bhe daikhoon tou palkain jhuka laita hon ...!!!
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Umair Abdullah
Take Rest...Ya Really working Hard
Number of posts : 1826
Age : 33
Location : Multan, Pakistan
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sun Sep 20, 2009 4:16 am |
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Muhabbat bandagi hay, is mein tann ka qurb mut mango
K jis ko choo liya jaye, usay pooja nahin kertay
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sun Sep 20, 2009 4:25 am |
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Abhi mohabbat ka ism-e-aazam laboon pe rehnay de jan-e-MOHSIN
Abhi hai chahat nai nai si, abhi hain jazbay jawan jawan se .....
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Umair Abdullah
Take Rest...Ya Really working Hard
Number of posts : 1826
Age : 33
Location : Multan, Pakistan
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sun Sep 20, 2009 4:32 am |
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Qafas mein rahay wo ta Umr, Jin ka
Khameer utha tha Khaak-e- Gulistaan se
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sun Sep 20, 2009 5:28 am |
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09 Yah Khud Aziyati Kab Tak Faraz To Bhe Ussay
Na Yaad Kar Kah Jissy Bholny Ke Aadat Hay.
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Umair Abdullah
Take Rest...Ya Really working Hard
Number of posts : 1826
Age : 33
Location : Multan, Pakistan
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K@mi
Tuk-Kay Moderator
Number of posts : 1437
Age : 27
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sun Sep 20, 2009 12:14 pm |
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sher sahi nahi likha aapne
correct aise hai k
ao 1 sajda karen aalam e madhoshi ma
log kehte han k sagar ko khuda yaad nahi
chaali hai badal k hath ko thaam ker khushbu
hawa k sath safar ka muzabila thehra
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Umair Abdullah
Take Rest...Ya Really working Hard
Number of posts : 1826
Age : 33
Location : Multan, Pakistan
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sun Sep 20, 2009 12:43 pm |
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K@mi
Tuk-Kay Moderator
Number of posts : 1437
Age : 27
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\-Mast Darinda-/
Vino De Jerez
Number of posts : 334
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Sep 21, 2009 3:23 am |
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pooch lo phool se kya karti hai kabhi khushboo bhi wafa karti hai  n 7 goes fo kami...
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