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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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 Subject: Rate the Previouse Shair Tue Mar 03, 2009 7:13 am |
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Rate the Previouse Shair
The rules are simple. You only have to read the shair from previous post and rate that shair from 1 to 10 out of 10. And also write your shair. I think it will be interesting !
So I start
usi jaga pay khara hun jahan wo bichra tha ,,,,,,
suna hai jab say k mosam palat k atay hain,,,,,,
No give points to my shair 
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Komal
Poetry Section Mod
Number of posts : 2263
Age : 33
Location : Toronto, Canada
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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Komal
Poetry Section Mod
Number of posts : 2263
Age : 33
Location : Toronto, Canada
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Wed Mar 04, 2009 2:49 pm |
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Tera na ho saka tu mar jaunga Faraz
Kitna kobsurat wo jhot bolta tha
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Vino
Vino De Jerez
Number of posts : 823
Age : 34
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Wed Mar 04, 2009 3:08 pm |
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8/10 kuch na kisi say bolain gay tanhaee mein ro lain gay neend to kya aaey gi Faraz maot aaee to so lain gay
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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Mast Hafsay
Boyz vs Girlz Mod
Number of posts : 12116
Age : 35
Location : multan
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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Mast Hafsay
Boyz vs Girlz Mod
Number of posts : 12116
Age : 35
Location : multan
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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Komal
Poetry Section Mod
Number of posts : 2263
Age : 33
Location : Toronto, Canada
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sun Mar 08, 2009 3:30 pm |
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10 gud one shanu..luvd it!!!
Udasiyoon ka koi sabab ho to batlaein!!!
K hm aksar bay sabab udaas rahtay hain
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$am
Chilli Milli
Number of posts : 7107
Age : 35
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sun Mar 08, 2009 3:35 pm |
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aww nyc poetry Komal...10/10 yeh na ho kahin tjhe ko la-jawab ker don main.. kuch sawal rehney dey..kuch jawab rehne dey..
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Komal
Poetry Section Mod
Number of posts : 2263
Age : 33
Location : Toronto, Canada
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Mast Hafsay
Boyz vs Girlz Mod
Number of posts : 12116
Age : 35
Location : multan
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Mar 09, 2009 12:49 am |
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9/10
Itna Tasalsul to meri sanson mein b nai FARAZ
jis rawani se wo shakhs mujhe yaad ata hai
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Komal
Poetry Section Mod
Number of posts : 2263
Age : 33
Location : Toronto, Canada
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Mar 09, 2009 2:42 pm |
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9 koi shart hoti nahi pyar mein
magaer pyar shartoon pe tumne kiya
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Awz
Halla Gulla Mod
Number of posts : 2018
Age : 34
Location : Karachi
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Mar 09, 2009 2:51 pm |
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6/10.... Khusyon ki aarzu main muqaddar bhi sogayeaandhi chali kuch aisi k apne hi kho gaye kia khub tha unka andaaz muhabbat kapyar dene aae the palkein bhigo gae
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Mast Hafsay
Boyz vs Girlz Mod
Number of posts : 12116
Age : 35
Location : multan
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Mar 09, 2009 3:02 pm |
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7/10Tum ko chaha tu mohbat ki samjh aiewarna iss lafz ki sirf tareef suna kartay they
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Komal
Poetry Section Mod
Number of posts : 2263
Age : 33
Location : Toronto, Canada
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Mar 09, 2009 3:04 pm |
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Meri hathoon ki lakeeron me ye aib chupa hai sagar.......
me jis shakh ko cho lon wo mera nahi rehta........
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Awz
Halla Gulla Mod
Number of posts : 2018
Age : 34
Location : Karachi
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Mar 09, 2009 3:06 pm |
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7/10.... Kyun kabi na aaya vo mere saath chal khamesha gaya muje nazar andaaz kr k maut per meri agar vo aaye tau keh dena abhi abhi soya hai tuje yaad kr k
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Mast Hafsay
Boyz vs Girlz Mod
Number of posts : 12116
Age : 35
Location : multan
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Mar 09, 2009 3:14 pm |
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7/10Us ki tawajah tere naseeb mein likhi he nahi........
chor dey apnay aap ko badnaseeb kehna............
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Komal
Poetry Section Mod
Number of posts : 2263
Age : 33
Location : Toronto, Canada
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Mar 09, 2009 3:15 pm |
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Aati hai yaad Aksar, Rotey hain be-basi mein
Aik Be-Wafa ko Hum ne, Chaaha tha Zindagi mein.
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Mast Hafsay
Boyz vs Girlz Mod
Number of posts : 12116
Age : 35
Location : multan
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Mar 09, 2009 3:20 pm |
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9 Hoti hai bari zalim Yaktarfa Mohbat........
Woh yaad tu atay hain par Yaad nahi kartay......
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Awz
Halla Gulla Mod
Number of posts : 2018
Age : 34
Location : Karachi
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Mar 09, 2009 3:25 pm |
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6/10 Zindagi main har dam hasntay rahohansna zindagi ki zarurat hai zindagi ko es andaaz main jio kaap ko dekh kr log kahein, wo dekho zindagi kitni khubsurat hai
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Komal
Poetry Section Mod
Number of posts : 2263
Age : 33
Location : Toronto, Canada
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Mar 09, 2009 3:26 pm |
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Tum mujhe bhool bhi jao to ye huk he tumko,
meri bat aur hai maine to mohabbat ki hai.
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