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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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 Subject: Rate the Previouse Shair Tue Mar 03, 2009 7:13 am |
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First topic message reminder :Rate the Previouse Shair
The rules are simple. You only have to read the shair from previous post and rate that shair from 1 to 10 out of 10. And also write your shair. I think it will be interesting !
So I start
usi jaga pay khara hun jahan wo bichra tha ,,,,,,
suna hai jab say k mosam palat k atay hain,,,,,,
No give points to my shair 
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Mast Hafsay
Boyz vs Girlz Mod
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
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Mast Hafsay
Boyz vs Girlz Mod
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Fri Mar 13, 2009 11:48 am |
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6 usay ye shikwa k mein usay samjh na saka aur mujhay ye maan k mein janta faqat usi ko tha 
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
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cool and nice
Agar forum bana-nay ka moqa mila tau uska naam kia rakho gay
Number of posts : 1342
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sat Mar 14, 2009 8:42 am |
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Knight Rider
Parha Likha Mod
Number of posts : 1656
Age : 31
Location : EVeRyWhErE
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sat Mar 14, 2009 8:44 am |
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Mere Halaat Ne Kardia Tha Khamosh Mujhe Faraz.................!! Zara hum Chup Kia Huay,, Doston Ne yaad hi KArna Chor Dia....
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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cool and nice
Agar forum bana-nay ka moqa mila tau uska naam kia rakho gay
Number of posts : 1342
Age : 35
Location : LHR
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sat Mar 14, 2009 8:50 am |
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Knight Rider
Parha Likha Mod
Number of posts : 1656
Age : 31
Location : EVeRyWhErE
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sat Mar 14, 2009 8:51 am |
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8 MUJH SAY HAR BAAR CHURA LAITA HAI NAZRAIN WOH FARAZ
MAIN NAY KAGHAZ PAY BHI DAIKHI HAIN BANA KAR ANKHAIN
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sat Mar 14, 2009 8:52 am |
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sat Mar 14, 2009 8:52 am |
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Knight Rider
Parha Likha Mod
Number of posts : 1656
Age : 31
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sat Mar 14, 2009 8:54 am |
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baad marnay k b us ne chora na dil jalana faraz... rooz phaink jata hy wo phool meri sath walli qabbar pr
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sat Mar 14, 2009 8:55 am |
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KNIGHT RIDER BRO LAST WORD SAY POETRY POST KERNA HAY AISAY HEE NAHE KERTAY JANA HAY LIKE MERI POST KAY END MAIN y THAA SO AAP USS SAY KERIN AISAY NAHE PLZZZ
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Knight Rider
Parha Likha Mod
Number of posts : 1656
Age : 31
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sat Mar 14, 2009 8:56 am |
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OKk Shanu Bro!! em sorry Bro!! I got It NoW!! I Will Correct!!
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sat Mar 14, 2009 8:58 am |
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NO ISSUE U CAN RATHER BETTER HAY KAY AFTER ENDING UR SHAIR AAP NEXT LINE MAIN WORD LIKHO SO THAT CONFUSION NAA HOO MERI GALTI HAY MAIN AISA NAHE KER RAHA THAA HOPE THAT NOW ALL IS WELL 
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Knight Rider
Parha Likha Mod
Number of posts : 1656
Age : 31
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sat Mar 14, 2009 8:58 am |
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Yupzzz!!! So Bro Now U can Start!! Em Wid yew
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sat Mar 14, 2009 9:09 am |
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knight kaa last word R thee
so from that
Raat ki khamoshi raas nahi aati
meri parchayi bhi ab mere paas nahi aati
kuch aati hai toh bas teri yaad jo aakar
ek pal bhi mujhse door nahi jaati
NEXT IS I
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Knight Rider
Parha Likha Mod
Number of posts : 1656
Age : 31
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sat Mar 14, 2009 9:19 am |
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8 Is sey pehley k mohabbat mein khasara ho jaye
Aao mil behtein k ye waqt hamara ho jaye
Hum ney kal rat KHUDA sey ye dua k hey Faraz
Tum jis shakas ko chaho wo tumhara ho jaye
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sat Mar 14, 2009 9:39 am |
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Ek shaam aa jao khul k hal-e-dil keh lein,
kon jane Sanson ki Mohlatein kahan tk hain. next is N
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Knight Rider
Parha Likha Mod
Number of posts : 1656
Age : 31
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sat Mar 14, 2009 10:04 am |
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Nizaam dil ka samajh paati hai aakhe kyu ke Nazro se kare waar to Aashiq nazar aaye
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Mast Hafsay
Boyz vs Girlz Mod
Number of posts : 12116
Age : 35
Location : multan
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sat Mar 14, 2009 10:36 am |
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 idhr kiya kachra macha diya hai????????? 6 uski mohbat ne itna mazboot kiya mujh ko faraz k faqat us ki judai k siwa koi mujhay tor na saka
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Lycan
3000 Posts n u r a V.I.P member
Number of posts : 2921
Age : 37
Location : lahore, pakistan
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sat Mar 14, 2009 10:46 am |
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6 kaha tha uss nay k apna bana k choron ga! oor phir kia bhi yahi " apna bana k chor dia"
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Mar 16, 2009 2:13 am |
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MAHI thats not a shair i guess yeh nazam say belong kerta hay aap nay isay 2 line main likha hay verna yeh break main aata hay i mean yeh sari baat 3 or 4 lines main aati hay anyways 7 for that Jaane Kyun Chorh gaya Mujhko wo Kum Feham Faraaz
Mai To Mukhlis Thaa Kisi Maaa ki Duaaon ki tarah
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sheroz
You Rock... !
Number of posts : 3405
Age : 34
Location : United States of Matti tal
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Mar 16, 2009 2:16 am |
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8 ager wo poch lein hum se k tumhein kis bat ka gham hay? tu phir kis baat ka ghum ho. ager wo poch lein hum se
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Komal
Poetry Section Mod
Number of posts : 2263
Age : 33
Location : Toronto, Canada
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Mar 16, 2009 12:23 pm |
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JAb mohabbat thi unse wo zamana aur tha...
AB ANAA ka masla hai.... WOH kHUd chal kar ayega.....
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sheroz
You Rock... !
Number of posts : 3405
Age : 34
Location : United States of Matti tal
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Wed Mar 18, 2009 3:10 am |
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wo smajhta hay k hr shaks badal jata hay faraz
osay lgta hay k zamana os k jaisa hay..........
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$arah khan
Darin Princess
Number of posts : 3980
Age : 35
Location : karachi
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Wed Mar 18, 2009 3:45 am |
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05 jud aho k bula lou mujhe jis wakt ... mein gya wakt nhin k phir aa bhi nah sakun.. :face:
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sheroz
You Rock... !
Number of posts : 3405
Age : 34
Location : United States of Matti tal
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Wed Mar 18, 2009 4:02 am |
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sarah aap nay ghalat sher likh diya hay. ye asal mein aisay hay. meharbaaN ho ke bulaa lo mujhe chaaho jis waqt maiN gayaa waqt nahiN hooN ke phir aa bhi na sakooN
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Wed Mar 18, 2009 6:50 am |
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8 for sheroz @ sarah never mind dear keep trying
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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