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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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 Subject: Rate the Previouse Shair Tue Mar 03, 2009 7:13 am |
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First topic message reminder :Rate the Previouse Shair
The rules are simple. You only have to read the shair from previous post and rate that shair from 1 to 10 out of 10. And also write your shair. I think it will be interesting !
So I start
usi jaga pay khara hun jahan wo bichra tha ,,,,,,
suna hai jab say k mosam palat k atay hain,,,,,,
No give points to my shair 
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Komal
Poetry Section Mod
Number of posts : 2263
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Apr 13, 2009 10:13 am |
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7 bari mushkil se sulaya hai khud ko mein ne, apni ankhoon ko tere khwuab ka lalach de kar
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Lycan
3000 Posts n u r a V.I.P member
Number of posts : 2921
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Apr 13, 2009 10:15 am |
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hum to mohabat main bhi toheed kay qail hia faraz
aik hi shaks ko apna mehboob bana rakhaha hay
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Komal
Poetry Section Mod
Number of posts : 2263
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Apr 13, 2009 10:17 am |
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7 maza barsaat ka jo chahoo tu in ankhoon mein aa betho ,, wo barsoon mein kabhi barsen ,ye barsoon se barasti hain
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Mast Hafsay
Boyz vs Girlz Mod
Number of posts : 12116
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Apr 13, 2009 10:18 am |
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6 Na Umeedi Kay Hum Qa-ill Tou Nahi Hain Magar ...
Hum Nay Barsaat Main Jaltay Huay Ghar Dekhay Hain ... 
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Lycan
3000 Posts n u r a V.I.P member
Number of posts : 2921
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Apr 13, 2009 10:19 am |
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Yeh masoOmiat ka kOun sa AnDaz hai Faraz
Per kaat k kehnE LaGe ABh tum Azaad ho
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Komal
Poetry Section Mod
Number of posts : 2263
Age : 33
Location : Toronto, Canada
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Apr 13, 2009 10:23 am |
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6 Tum taluq tornay ka kahin zikar na karna "FARAZ" Main logon se kehdonga k usey fursat nahi milti . .
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Lycan
3000 Posts n u r a V.I.P member
Number of posts : 2921
Age : 37
Location : lahore, pakistan
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Apr 13, 2009 10:24 am |
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inn barishon say dosti achi nahi faraz
kacha tara makan hay kuch tu khayal kar[b]
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Komal
Poetry Section Mod
Number of posts : 2263
Age : 33
Location : Toronto, Canada
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Apr 13, 2009 10:28 am |
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7 Abi to zid hai usay rasta badlne ki “FARAZ” Kabhi wo roey ga khud, meri chahaton ke liye
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Mast Hafsay
Boyz vs Girlz Mod
Number of posts : 12116
Age : 35
Location : multan
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Tue Apr 14, 2009 1:57 am |
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8 Dil Ki Dharkanoo Ko ik lamha saber nahi,
Shayd k us ko ab meri kader nahi,
Her safer mein mera kabhi hamsafer tha woh,
Ab safer to hai mager wo hamsafer nahi..!
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zulfi_rocks
Herez Your Gift...All Your Ranks Are Full Now...
Number of posts : 2177
Age : 34
Location : Faisalabad
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Wed Apr 15, 2009 7:18 am |
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7 Just Check This, Subhaanallah, it is one of the most great lines of IQBAL. Ishq Ki ik Jast Ne, Kar Diya Qissa Tamaam,
Is Zameen o Aasmaan ko be-karaan samjha tha main. Poet of EastJast ( Jump ), Be-karaan ( Unlimited, La mehdood )
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Wed Apr 15, 2009 7:37 am |
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bohat he umda zulfi
kuch mohsin naqvi kay naam
ye zarooree nahin her shakhs maseeha he ho
pyaar ke zakhm amaanat hain dikhaayaa na karo
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Mast Hafsay
Boyz vs Girlz Mod
Number of posts : 12116
Age : 35
Location : multan
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Thu Apr 16, 2009 1:30 am |
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9 mein ek khilona hon aur woh us bachay ki maanind he jisay piyar tu hai mujh se magr khilnay ki had tak
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Kuch Kaho Kisi Say Apni Voice Main
Number of posts : 679
Age : 36
Location : PeXawar
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Thu Apr 16, 2009 1:44 am |
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8.5..
Badhta raha badan mein mere dum ba dum lahu
Seene pe tha wo dast-e-heenai tamaam raat
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Mast Hafsay
Boyz vs Girlz Mod
Number of posts : 12116
Age : 35
Location : multan
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Thu Apr 16, 2009 1:46 am |
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6 mujhay itna na chaho k mein khud ko tum samjh beithon mujhay ehsasa rehnay do meri apni bhi hasti hai
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Kuch Kaho Kisi Say Apni Voice Main
Number of posts : 679
Age : 36
Location : PeXawar
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sheroz
You Rock... !
Number of posts : 3405
Age : 34
Location : United States of Matti tal
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Thu Apr 16, 2009 4:55 am |
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7 hum nay mana k taghaful na kero gay tum lakin khak ho jain gay hum tum ko khaber honay tak
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Mast Hafsay
Boyz vs Girlz Mod
Number of posts : 12116
Age : 35
Location : multan
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Thu Apr 16, 2009 5:04 am |
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7 ajab lutf aa raha tha deedar ki dil lagi ka...... k nazrain bhi mujh per thi or parda bhi mujh se tha.........
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Lycan
3000 Posts n u r a V.I.P member
Number of posts : 2921
Age : 37
Location : lahore, pakistan
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Thu Apr 16, 2009 5:33 am |
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Aa ke ab tasleem ka lein, tuu nahin tou mein sahi
Koun maaney ga ke ham mein be-wafaa koi nahin
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sheroz
You Rock... !
Number of posts : 3405
Age : 34
Location : United States of Matti tal
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Fri Apr 17, 2009 7:26 am |
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os se wabasta muhabbat ki khush fehmi thi faraz
mout ki hechki aie to samjha os nay yaad kia
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Mast Hafsay
Boyz vs Girlz Mod
Number of posts : 12116
Age : 35
Location : multan
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sat Apr 18, 2009 6:22 am |
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8 bagh ka har phool kabhi khilta nahihar Qadam sath koi chalta nahiye dastor hai shehr e mohbat kajisay shidat se chaho woh kabhi milta nahi 
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sat Apr 18, 2009 6:23 am |
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her dukh ko jaagir bana laita ha apni........
ye dil bhi to woosat main zameenon ki tarah....
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Kuch Kaho Kisi Say Apni Voice Main
Number of posts : 679
Age : 36
Location : PeXawar
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sun Apr 19, 2009 12:42 am |
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7.55 Go hum Zindagi k maarein hain.... Laikin chamaktayh uay Sitaray hain  Meri jhOoli mein jitnay Pathhar hai... Wo sab Dooston ne Maarein hain... 
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Komal
Poetry Section Mod
Number of posts : 2263
Age : 33
Location : Toronto, Canada
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sheroz
You Rock... !
Number of posts : 3405
Age : 34
Location : United States of Matti tal
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Tue Apr 21, 2009 5:24 am |
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7 ab tu os se milna aur b zrori ho gya hay faraz log kehtay hain os ki aankhon mein mera aks nazar aata hay
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Komal
Poetry Section Mod
Number of posts : 2263
Age : 33
Location : Toronto, Canada
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Wed Apr 22, 2009 11:01 am |
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7 ana ki qaid se nikley muqabla to karey woh mere sath mein chalney ka faisla to karey kabhi na totney wala hisar ban jaoon woh meri zaat mein rhene ka faisla to karey
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sheroz
You Rock... !
Number of posts : 3405
Age : 34
Location : United States of Matti tal
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Apr 27, 2009 4:13 am |
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6 bay naizi had se guzri banda parwar kab talak hum kahein gay hal-dil or ap ferma dein gay "kya"
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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sheroz
You Rock... !
Number of posts : 3405
Age : 34
Location : United States of Matti tal
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Apr 27, 2009 2:50 pm |
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8 hum cheen len gay tum se ye ada-e-bay naizi tum mangtay phiro gay apna ghroor hum say
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Tue Apr 28, 2009 10:45 am |
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Baray Nazuk Hotay Hain Ye Pyaar Kay Rishtay
Hanstay Hanstay Bhi Kabhi DIL Toot Jatay Hain
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Hamza
You are very close to your dream
Number of posts : 2891
Age : 38
Location : Lahore
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Thu Apr 30, 2009 2:38 am |
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8 Dil tab se udass hai jab se khabar hoi hai FARAZ
Miltay hain wo khaloos se her ajnabi k sath..
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