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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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 Subject: Rate the Previouse Shair Tue Mar 03, 2009 7:13 am |
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First topic message reminder :Rate the Previouse Shair
The rules are simple. You only have to read the shair from previous post and rate that shair from 1 to 10 out of 10. And also write your shair. I think it will be interesting !
So I start
usi jaga pay khara hun jahan wo bichra tha ,,,,,,
suna hai jab say k mosam palat k atay hain,,,,,,
No give points to my shair 
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sun Apr 12, 2009 2:20 am |
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no worries 7.5 Yoon Lagta hay Sootay Jaagtay Aooro’on ka Mohtaaj Hoon MEIN AANKHIEN MERI Apni Hain Par Unn Mein NEEND PARAAI hay…!!!
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zulfi_rocks
Herez Your Gift...All Your Ranks Are Full Now...
Number of posts : 2177
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sun Apr 12, 2009 2:33 am |
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8 Check this, these lines r from the best ghazal i ever read. Mohabat kya hai, Dil ka Dard Se Mamoor ho jana,
Mata - e - Jaan kisi ko suonp kar Majboor ho jana.
Qadam hain Raah-e-Ulfat mein to manzil ki hawas kaisi
Yahan to Ain manzil hai thakan se choo ho jana.
Mufti Taqi Usmani
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Mast Hafsay
Boyz vs Girlz Mod
Number of posts : 12116
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sun Apr 12, 2009 5:30 am |
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9 Teri Qurbat mili magar tera Sahara na Mila,,,
Qareeb puhanch ker bhi Sahil ke Kinara na Mila,,,
Dekhta Raha Gaur se main hatheli apniii,,,
Magar Mujhe apni Kismat ka Sittara na Mila,,,
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zulfi_rocks
Herez Your Gift...All Your Ranks Are Full Now...
Number of posts : 2177
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sun Apr 12, 2009 5:50 am |
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7.5 Mere daman mein kaantoun k siwa kuch nahi or aap phooloun k khareedar nazar aate hain
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Mast Hafsay
Boyz vs Girlz Mod
Number of posts : 12116
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sun Apr 12, 2009 5:56 am |
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7 Woh ajnabee hai Jaane kab chod de,,,
Hawa ka kya pata kab rukh mod de,,,
Hum to dusron ka Dil khush rakhte hai,,,
Par Dusron ka kya pata kab Dil tod de,,,
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zulfi_rocks
Herez Your Gift...All Your Ranks Are Full Now...
Number of posts : 2177
Age : 34
Location : Faisalabad
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sun Apr 12, 2009 6:12 am |
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5 Hum ne jin k liye rahoun mein bichaya th lahoo hum se kehte hain wohi Ahd-e-wafa yaad nahi
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Mast Hafsay
Boyz vs Girlz Mod
Number of posts : 12116
Age : 35
Location : multan
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sun Apr 12, 2009 9:07 am |
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4 khaairat me mili khushi mujhe achi nai lagti Faraz,
main apne dukhon me rehta hn nawabon kia trha...
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Usama1
You Rock... !
Number of posts : 3742
Age : 33
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sun Apr 12, 2009 9:19 am |
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8 us ki jafaon nay mughy ik tahzeeb sikha di hai mohsin, main rotay hovay so jata ho per shikwa nai kerta
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Mast Hafsay
Boyz vs Girlz Mod
Number of posts : 12116
Age : 35
Location : multan
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sun Apr 12, 2009 10:05 am |
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7 Abi to zid hai usay rasta badlne ki “FARAZ” Kabhi wo roey ga khud, meri chahaton ke liye..! 
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zulfi_rocks
Herez Your Gift...All Your Ranks Are Full Now...
Number of posts : 2177
Age : 34
Location : Faisalabad
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sun Apr 12, 2009 10:46 am |
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3.5 Shuker ki mere Inteha, DAAGH na rahi kyun k,
Muhko wo mere naam se pehchaan to gaya. Mirza Daagh
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Apr 13, 2009 9:18 am |
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Woh Jo Mera Aehd-E-Jamal Tha Woh Jo Mera Shehr-E-Khyaal Tha
K Ab Us Ka Zikr-E-Kamaal Bhi Kahin Harf-E-Khwaab Main Reh Gaya
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Lycan
3000 Posts n u r a V.I.P member
Number of posts : 2921
Age : 37
Location : lahore, pakistan
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Apr 13, 2009 9:28 am |
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6.5
nahie zindagi say koee gila k thaa khawab jaysa hi silsila
kabhi teergi ka asar howa, kabhi chandni say bhi daar gaye
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Apr 13, 2009 9:38 am |
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Mohsin mujhay chherain gay bohot chand, naddi, phool
aya na mera yar agar ab ke baras bhi....
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Lycan
3000 Posts n u r a V.I.P member
Number of posts : 2921
Age : 37
Location : lahore, pakistan
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Apr 13, 2009 9:45 am |
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Majbooriyon ki baat chali hai tau maey kahan
Hum ne piya hai zehar bhi aksar khushi k sath
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Komal
Poetry Section Mod
Number of posts : 2263
Age : 33
Location : Toronto, Canada
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Apr 13, 2009 9:49 am |
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hazaar gam sahe lekin na aaya aankh me aansu,,
ham ahle zarf hen peete hen chhalkaya nahi karte..
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Lycan
3000 Posts n u r a V.I.P member
Number of posts : 2921
Age : 37
Location : lahore, pakistan
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Apr 13, 2009 9:50 am |
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7.5
Wafa Ki Raah Mein,Main Aaj bhi Akaila Houn
Koi Nahi Hai MerE Saath,Uss Se Keh Dena
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Komal
Poetry Section Mod
Number of posts : 2263
Age : 33
Location : Toronto, Canada
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Apr 13, 2009 9:54 am |
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7 Aey dekhne walo mujhe hans hans ke na dekho.... tum ko bhi muhabbat kahin mujh sa na bana dey
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Lycan
3000 Posts n u r a V.I.P member
Number of posts : 2921
Age : 37
Location : lahore, pakistan
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Apr 13, 2009 9:55 am |
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rahe ga sath tera payar zindagi baan kar
yeh or baat meri zindagi wafa na kare
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Komal
Poetry Section Mod
Number of posts : 2263
Age : 33
Location : Toronto, Canada
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Apr 13, 2009 9:56 am |
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7.5 ye zara zara si bat py tarha tarha k azab hain jo kisi say bhi kafa na ho mujy us khuda ki talash hay
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Lycan
3000 Posts n u r a V.I.P member
Number of posts : 2921
Age : 37
Location : lahore, pakistan
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Apr 13, 2009 9:58 am |
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Meri be'lows mohabbat ney diboya hai muje
Itna mukhlis hoon k har dil main uter jaat hon
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Komal
Poetry Section Mod
Number of posts : 2263
Age : 33
Location : Toronto, Canada
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Apr 13, 2009 9:59 am |
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Apni chaahat ma shiraakat mujhe manzoor nahi
Ab tujhe bhi teri khwaahish nahi karne doon ga
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Lycan
3000 Posts n u r a V.I.P member
Number of posts : 2921
Age : 37
Location : lahore, pakistan
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Apr 13, 2009 10:01 am |
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Yeh soz-o-karb mojhay tajrubon nay bakhsha hai
Jalaana shamm’a to daaman say faslaa rakhnaa
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Komal
Poetry Section Mod
Number of posts : 2263
Age : 33
Location : Toronto, Canada
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Apr 13, 2009 10:08 am |
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6 Aana parast hai wo,jante hain hum lekin Wo khud bhulaye ga is baat ka yaqeen bhi hai
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Mast Hafsay
Boyz vs Girlz Mod
Number of posts : 12116
Age : 35
Location : multan
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Apr 13, 2009 10:11 am |
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8 kabi youn b ho mere roobaroo' ma itna tujh se keh sakon
meri hasraton ka shumar ker' meri khwahishon ka hisab day
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Lycan
3000 Posts n u r a V.I.P member
Number of posts : 2921
Age : 37
Location : lahore, pakistan
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Komal
Poetry Section Mod
Number of posts : 2263
Age : 33
Location : Toronto, Canada
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Apr 13, 2009 10:13 am |
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7 bari mushkil se sulaya hai khud ko mein ne, apni ankhoon ko tere khwuab ka lalach de kar
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Lycan
3000 Posts n u r a V.I.P member
Number of posts : 2921
Age : 37
Location : lahore, pakistan
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Apr 13, 2009 10:15 am |
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hum to mohabat main bhi toheed kay qail hia faraz
aik hi shaks ko apna mehboob bana rakhaha hay
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Komal
Poetry Section Mod
Number of posts : 2263
Age : 33
Location : Toronto, Canada
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Apr 13, 2009 10:17 am |
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7 maza barsaat ka jo chahoo tu in ankhoon mein aa betho ,, wo barsoon mein kabhi barsen ,ye barsoon se barasti hain
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Mast Hafsay
Boyz vs Girlz Mod
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Age : 35
Location : multan
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Apr 13, 2009 10:18 am |
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6 Na Umeedi Kay Hum Qa-ill Tou Nahi Hain Magar ...
Hum Nay Barsaat Main Jaltay Huay Ghar Dekhay Hain ...
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Lycan
3000 Posts n u r a V.I.P member
Number of posts : 2921
Age : 37
Location : lahore, pakistan
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Apr 13, 2009 10:19 am |
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Yeh masoOmiat ka kOun sa AnDaz hai Faraz
Per kaat k kehnE LaGe ABh tum Azaad ho
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