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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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 Subject: Rate the Previouse Shair Tue Mar 03, 2009 7:13 am |
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First topic message reminder :Rate the Previouse Shair
The rules are simple. You only have to read the shair from previous post and rate that shair from 1 to 10 out of 10. And also write your shair. I think it will be interesting !
So I start
usi jaga pay khara hun jahan wo bichra tha ,,,,,,
suna hai jab say k mosam palat k atay hain,,,,,,
No give points to my shair 
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sheroz
You Rock... !
Number of posts : 3405
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Wed Mar 18, 2009 3:10 am |
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wo smajhta hay k hr shaks badal jata hay faraz
osay lgta hay k zamana os k jaisa hay..........
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$arah khan
Darin Princess
Number of posts : 3980
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Wed Mar 18, 2009 3:45 am |
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05 jud aho k bula lou mujhe jis wakt ... mein gya wakt nhin k phir aa bhi nah sakun.. :face:
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sheroz
You Rock... !
Number of posts : 3405
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Wed Mar 18, 2009 4:02 am |
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sarah aap nay ghalat sher likh diya hay. ye asal mein aisay hay. meharbaaN ho ke bulaa lo mujhe chaaho jis waqt maiN gayaa waqt nahiN hooN ke phir aa bhi na sakooN
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Wed Mar 18, 2009 6:50 am |
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8 for sheroz @ sarah never mind dear keep trying
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
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Lycan
3000 Posts n u r a V.I.P member
Number of posts : 2921
Age : 37
Location : lahore, pakistan
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Wed Mar 18, 2009 7:43 am |
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7 umar e daraz mang k lye thay 4 din 2 aarzu main kut gaye 2 intizar main
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$arah khan
Darin Princess
Number of posts : 3980
Age : 35
Location : karachi
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Thu Mar 19, 2009 6:25 am |
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05 @AWW SORRI.. tumhein phir koi chahat ki nigha se dekhey ga .. magr wo ankhein hamari kahan se laye ga.. 
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sheroz
You Rock... !
Number of posts : 3405
Age : 34
Location : United States of Matti tal
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Thu Mar 19, 2009 7:00 am |
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6 tum mere pass hotay ho goya jb koi dosra nahi hota.
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cool and nice
Agar forum bana-nay ka moqa mila tau uska naam kia rakho gay
Number of posts : 1342
Age : 35
Location : LHR
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Thu Mar 19, 2009 7:02 am |
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7 I need to know if you’re my true friend, will you be by my side until the end?
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sheroz
You Rock... !
Number of posts : 3405
Age : 34
Location : United States of Matti tal
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Thu Mar 19, 2009 7:29 am |
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6 jo main sar-ba-sajda kabhi hua to zamin se ane lagi sada tera dil to hai sanam-ashana tujhe kya milega namaz mein
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cool and nice
Agar forum bana-nay ka moqa mila tau uska naam kia rakho gay
Number of posts : 1342
Age : 35
Location : LHR
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Thu Mar 19, 2009 8:14 am |
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5 I thought I had found the perfect friend, But it only took about a week for that to end,
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Lycan
3000 Posts n u r a V.I.P member
Number of posts : 2921
Age : 37
Location : lahore, pakistan
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Thu Mar 19, 2009 8:45 am |
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3 wasal k khawab ki tabeer say sharminda hon abb koi oor sitam soch k main zinda hon!
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$arah khan
Darin Princess
Number of posts : 3980
Age : 35
Location : karachi
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sat Mar 21, 2009 11:48 am |
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09 nayee Subha ati hai har sham k baad.. phir kyun khatam hai dunya tere naam k baad
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sun Mar 22, 2009 12:50 pm |
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8 dil main jalty tu hain teri yadoon k chiragh mana k is ki roshni tum tak aaaayan nahi
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zulfi_rocks
Herez Your Gift...All Your Ranks Are Full Now...
Number of posts : 2177
Age : 34
Location : Faisalabad
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sun Mar 22, 2009 2:20 pm |
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6 Hum kis Shauq se un ki shaan mein nazuk ghazlein kehte hain wo sharma kar kehtey hain ye baatein hain ruswayi ki...... Zya (Alfaaz Mere Hain)
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Komal
Poetry Section Mod
Number of posts : 2263
Age : 33
Location : Toronto, Canada
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sun Mar 22, 2009 11:24 pm |
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6 Wo Chala Gaya Mujhay Chor K Magar Apni Yaad Bhi De Gaya Main Khara Hoon Kaisay Makam Per Na Firak Hai Na Wisaal Hai
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$arah khan
Darin Princess
Number of posts : 3980
Age : 35
Location : karachi
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Sun Mar 22, 2009 11:38 pm |
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06 chandni raat main or bhi shidat say ayay gi us ki yad . behtar hai faraz so jana sham say pahlay.... 
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zulfi_rocks
Herez Your Gift...All Your Ranks Are Full Now...
Number of posts : 2177
Age : 34
Location : Faisalabad
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Mon Mar 23, 2009 1:16 am |
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5 Ghalib humein na ched k Josh-e-Ashk se bethe hain hum irada-e-Toofaan kiye hue,
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$arah khan
Darin Princess
Number of posts : 3980
Age : 35
Location : karachi
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Tue Mar 24, 2009 2:51 am |
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06 Laut aaye ga kissi Rooz VOH Aawara Mizaaj Khol rakhtay hain issi AASS pay “DARR” Shaam kay baad…!!!
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Lycan
3000 Posts n u r a V.I.P member
Number of posts : 2921
Age : 37
Location : lahore, pakistan
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Tue Mar 24, 2009 5:43 am |
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7 hye yeh diwangi apni nahi mujhko khabar hye yeh aalam k tu dil say juda hota nahi!
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Tue Mar 24, 2009 9:48 am |
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7 aandhiyon ke mousam mein iss tarah tou hota hai..... khushbuon ke phoolon se silsilay tou tootein gay....
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Komal
Poetry Section Mod
Number of posts : 2263
Age : 33
Location : Toronto, Canada
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Tue Mar 24, 2009 10:04 am |
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Ek Baar Wo Mila Tha Mujhe Berukhi Ke Saath
US Din Say Dil Ka Sheher Barabar Udaas Hai
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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zulfi_rocks
Herez Your Gift...All Your Ranks Are Full Now...
Number of posts : 2177
Age : 34
Location : Faisalabad
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Tue Mar 24, 2009 11:38 am |
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6 Mahiney Wasal k Ghadiyoun ki surat urte jate hain magar ghadiyan judai ki guzarti hain mahinoun mein dr.iqbal
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$arah khan
Darin Princess
Number of posts : 3980
Age : 35
Location : karachi
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Tue Mar 24, 2009 11:44 am |
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05 na tu gham ki dhoop jala saki na hi mosmoon ka asar hua
yeh meri wafa ka hi phool hai jo abhi talk hai khila hua
meri baat aour hai choriey main aseeer-e-jazba-e-ishq hoon
zara apney dil ko bhi dekhiey yeh bataiey issey kia hua
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zulfi_rocks
Herez Your Gift...All Your Ranks Are Full Now...
Number of posts : 2177
Age : 34
Location : Faisalabad
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Tue Mar 24, 2009 12:45 pm |
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03 Maana k teri deed k qabil nahi hoon main tu mera shauq dekh mera intazaar dekh dr.iqbal
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$arah khan
Darin Princess
Number of posts : 3980
Age : 35
Location : karachi
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Tue Mar 24, 2009 1:17 pm |
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05 hath us ka barha dosti kay liye or adawat ki lambi gharri reh gai
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zulfi_rocks
Herez Your Gift...All Your Ranks Are Full Now...
Number of posts : 2177
Age : 34
Location : Faisalabad
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Tue Mar 24, 2009 1:53 pm |
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04 Khamosh, ae dil, bhari mehfil mein chilana nahi acha adab pehla kareena hai mohabat k kareenoun mein
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shanu
Poetry Contest Winner
Number of posts : 9384
Age : 114
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Tue Mar 24, 2009 10:36 pm |
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huee muddat keh Ghalib marr gaya, parr yaad aata hai...
woh har ik bat pae kehna, keh yoon hota, to kiya hota....
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sheroz
You Rock... !
Number of posts : 3405
Age : 34
Location : United States of Matti tal
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| Subject: Re: Rate the Previouse Shair Wed Mar 25, 2009 8:38 am |
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9 sirf ik shaks ki khatir mujhay barbad na roz rotay huay kehti hay zindgi mujh se
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